Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Please review my lyrics?

(Intro)
It seems like forever in the past, forever ago. It went away like a
burnt photograph. Good things never last forever is what I am told.
The pain starts out small than it controls all your thoughts. I replay
the lies that you sold. The cigarettes in the ash tray build up, along
with the mind bending debt.
(Chorus)
I bought into your overwhelming addiction. I don't want to go down
this road of want. So don't tell me we're a team. When it seems
like all you can do is take to feel something. I can't run and I
can't hide from a past that makes me who I am I wish I could go back
to when spring began. I see my life is just fading into an untold
story.
(Verse)
I Wish I could escape my mind when it wonders and worries back to when
spring began. I tell myself the memories will fade slowly but surely.
I have realized Regret and blame have a thin border line.
(Chorus)
I bought into your overwhelming addiction. I don't want to go down
this road of want. So don't tell me we're a team. When it seems
like all you can do is take to feel something. Can't run and I
can't hide from a past that makes me who I am I wish I could go back
to when spring began. I see my life is just fading into an untold
story.
(Verse)
I Wish I could escape my mind when it wonders and worries back to when
spring began. Denying seems to feel better than fighting. The day has
faded to black and the past blinds me. You're always there to remind
me that my memories will never fade.
(Chorus)
I bought into your overwhelming addiction. I don't want to go down
this road of want. So don't tell me we're a team. When it seems
like all you can do is take to feel something. Can't run and I
can't hide from a past that makes me who I am I wish I could go back
to when spring began. I see my life is just fading into an untold
story.
It seems like forever in the past, forever ago. It went away like a
burnt photograph

I know it's not my best but i just wanted to know what someone
thought. No it's not a love song. I'm 17 and i love to write i just
want someones opinion.

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